For Frank J. Tassone’s haikai challenge, since November is traditionally a winter month in Japan.
White as fallen snow,
Shining, peaceful sentinel
Candle in the dark
For Frank J. Tassone’s haikai challenge, since November is traditionally a winter month in Japan.
White as fallen snow,
Shining, peaceful sentinel
Candle in the dark
Reblogged this on Frank J. Tassone and commented:
#Haiku Happenings #8: revivedwriter’s latest haiku for my current #haikai challenge!
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So beautiful.
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The moon as a candle is a lovely image — I like the peaceful aura it creates on a cold winter night. 🙂
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sparse words but not spare … works a charm, as only the moon can 🙂
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Oh the moon is certainly a blessed candle in the night sky.
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Your verse made me think of folks escaping to freedom using the light of the moon.
A friendly face in adversity.
I enjoy how the winter full moon shines off of snow making everything bright.
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