I’m sharing this poem with the Writers’ Pantry #7. This sonnet is based on yesterday’s Gospel reading at Mass.
“My heart is moved with pity for the crowd” :
So said our Lord when many had pursued
Him as he taught the truth of God aloud.
Caring for them, He knew they needed food,
But what did the disciples have at hand ?
Five loaves, two fish, and they were tired too,
Unable to retreat as they had planned.
He urged the twelve to take a wider view,
Inviting them to trust, and their reward
Was being part of His abundant feast.
He was their wealth when they could not afford
to offer any more; even the least
Among the crowd did see Jesus provide:
They started hungry and left satisfied.
This is such a heartening write! 💝
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It’s quite a feat, to tell this old and well-known (well-loved) tale and make it so fresh and immediate. And I like the way the rhyming words seem to fall so naturally.
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Thank you!
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Nicely done.
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I love your retelling of this old biblical tale. Well done!
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