13 thoughts on “To Drink You In

  1. That’s beautiful – acceptance of the gift, and rain as a metaphor for so much more. The clean sentences at the start and finish round it off really well. Thank you for sharing.

    I love your rainwords, too. I don’t think I’d noticed how many of them began with “d” before.

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  2. I love the way you’ve dripped the alliterative words for the watery stuff throughout your poem: dew, downpour, drizzle, deluge, and drink, like drops bouncing off things!

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