Today at DVerse, we have prosery again. This is usually very difficult for me, so I rarely try it, but this week I want to try. 🙂 However, the given line, from Rilke, is challenging: “Only mouths are we. Who sings the distant heart which safely exists in the center of all things?” – from Rainer Maria Rilke, “Heartbeat.” I am also sharing this with yesterday’s Writers’ Pantry at PSU. I usually don’t share anything other than poems, so this should be fun.
There is something inside that must be spoken, before it eats its way out of its cage inside of her mind. She tries to find the words to express her secret, but with difficulty, for she can barely get any words out without shaking. She trips over those words, like stones in her path to freedom. Even the words that escape the prison of her lips do not seem to express fully what she means to say. Sadly she realizes, “Only mouths are we. Who sings the distant heart which safely exists in the center of all things?”
Continuing to tremble, as if trying to shake off the chains of the past, she hugs herself and feels the beat of her own heart in the center of her chest. It is the life inside of her, which is close and which has its own, wordless song. She takes a deep breath in and begins to speak again.
This is wonderfully deep and poignant, Jenna! I love where Rilke’s words took you.. and especially admire; ” she hugs herself and feels the beat of her own heart in the center of her chest. It is the life inside of her, which is close and which has its own, wordless song.” Thank you so much for writing to the prompt! 💝💝
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Well done! there is nothing like the feeling of being alive!
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Beautiful and true!!
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Nice take on growing prose around the quote!
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This is a beautiful prose piece which speaks of an indomitable inner strength!
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A wonder in here of the urge to be honest, authentic…. connecting with that and finding how to express them. Very well written.
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That’s just gorgeous! I’d have to call it prose poetry – which is meant as the highest compliment.
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the past may cast
but only can last
as long as you progress
yet
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This is amazing …
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To have the strength from your heart is what life possible
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Wordless song…. you capture the pain of opening up and being so very vulnerable to others.
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This is so poignant. I think she must have gone through quite a bit.
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Very interesting read.
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