Shock:
I’m not fine
I am never fine,
Dare to peer in this brain of
Mine?
See:
Look at me,
Does anyone care,
Beyond a few words and one
Prayer?
Days
Seem static,
Going nowhere while
Brain runs off a cliff or it
Fries.
Good time to reprise this photo
My thought process before this: “Okay, I finally finished that happy poem from last week. Let’s let out the other stuff.” MVB: Shock. FOWC: Anybody (close enough?). Then I started writing and realized I could make it into a Quadrille for DVerse; the week’s word is “static.” I’m not linking this up with it but figured I’d give credit for the inspiration. 🙂 At least I’ve written more now!!
revivedwriter 
wet and yet i may get there
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I like the in-your-face feel of this one. I wonder if the final stanza could also start with an “action” word to keep the momentum going?
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Good idea, Brian. I didn’t think of how the other 2 stanzas are more active or “in your face.”
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