Brian’s prompt for this week, which I am once again trying to complete on Thursday, is “the good life.” It was nice to reflect on what makes a good life — a good life does not have to be an easy life. It was also a timely reminder that I already have many aspects of “the good life.” 🙂 At the end of each day, before going to sleep, I thank God for many things, every good thing that I can remember from the day — and most days I have a litany. This poem is also for DVerse and is a cinq-cinquain.
Breathe in:
Salty sea air,
Relaxing on the sand
Feeling the sun as the waves break —
Take breaks
Sometimes.
Other times life
Requires the daily grind,
Work giving oneself a purpose,
Reason
To wake
Each new morning,
Other than the coffee
(Although that always is a plus
For me) —
Even
In Eden ere
The first sin, Adam worked
As a gardener helping all life
To grow —
Reasons
To face each day,
A purpose found in life:
Actions to take, imprints to leave,
To love

I think having a doggy would make “the good life” even better. 🙂
I love how this transitioned from relaxation to purpose. “Actions to take, imprints to leave” – YES.
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“Adam worked
As a gardener helping all life
To grow.”
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a cinquain to life – so uplifting!
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for some the beach is still outta reach
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Ah yes the good life …. a lovely poem!
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From breathing in to loving…there is enough purpose to life. Jenna, you are leaving imprints with your meaningful words! And yes, a doggy would make a difference. ❤️
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I appreciate this, especially coming from you, as I admire your fantastic poetry!
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Thank you.
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It is good to think about what we have in life, and the good things (including coffee). 😊
And pets are good things, too.
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I like your reference to Adam in the garden…we’re made to work with purpose!
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Having a purpose makes living and loving so much better.
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Lovely words…the importance of relaxation, the beach…and love….
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