Here is a response to the latest decastich challenge from Linda Luna, the mirror oddquain. I thought that was a very…odd…name for a type of poem, but it comes from the word “cinquain.” Cinquains have line lengths of 2, 4, 6, 8, and 2 syllables, but oddquains use only odd numbers: 1, 3, 5, 7, and 1. Mirror oddquains are made up of two oddquains, but the second one is “flipped,” so that the final syllable count is 1/3/5/7/1/1/7/5/3/1. Now, without any further ado, here is my poem. Thank you for your patience. 🙂
Take
A moment
To just breathe, and be,
There’s no need to constantly
Work —
Rest,
And it will be evident,
What a precious gift
That patience
Gives.
This is amazing, and just what I needed at this time. In general I consider myself a patient person, but just now I needed to stop and breathe. Every word of your poem exudes peace. Thank you.
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