For Frank J. Tassone’s weekly haikai challenge. This week we are writing about spring or autumn rains. This was inspired by the weather last Sunday.
The clouds come, the rain
Stays under its gray blankets.
Three drops say hello.
For Frank J. Tassone’s weekly haikai challenge. This week we are writing about spring or autumn rains. This was inspired by the weather last Sunday.
The clouds come, the rain
Stays under its gray blankets.
Three drops say hello.
revivedwriter 
Nice poem! I like this three drops saying hello
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“Three drops say hello” – lovely line!
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Three drops – that’s very symbolic! To me – of new life.
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Reblogged this on Frank J. Tassone and commented:
#Haiku Happenings #1 (5/18/18): revivedwriter’s latest haiku for my current #haikai challenge!
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I love three drops… but a million can make me wet.
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Beautifully rendered 💞
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‘Three drops said hello’ made me smile! :).
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Nice use of clouds and blankets with saying hello.
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Three drops said hello…I love this.
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I love the gray blanket of clouds. Well done!
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Maybe change “said” to “say” (present tense, like the other lines)? I like the idea that weather can be hesitant…
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Hello 3 times I like that!
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Concise and to the point. I like thee drops say hello!
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