I am really loving the Chaucerian stanza form! Linked to DVerse OLN 209.
Give me your yes and I shall give you mine,
Give me your heart and I will love like you,
May we both share in lovely life divine,
Let us experience a life that’s true.
Let me extend forgiveness as you do.
The way you show is all I need to know,
May my face with your radiance daily glow.
Nice sound. That is a nice form. I especially liked the last line.
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This is a beautiful line: Let me extend forgiveness as you do.
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Love the way this flows. Beautiful!
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Nice love poem
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I love to see poets working with form–it takes discipline and grows us as poets. Bravo.
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A beautiful form and lovely homage to a an eternal kind of love.
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