For DVerse Poetics: Cheers!, we are to write inspired by a drink. I’m glad that it wasn’t limited to alcoholic beverages because I don’t drink; in fact, I find the mere smell of alcohol repulsive.
Other people have written gorgeous poems involving wine, but this is mine. 😅 I write what I know, haha. Comments are appreciated.
Starbucks is my bar. I walked straight there, after Getting my heart broken (again) I needed a hot, tall (handsome?) Dark roast immediately that morning, And time to cry and write. The salt from my tears Under the rims of my glasses Made me look somewhat on the rocks.
Nicely written! 👌👏😁
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Sounds like a place you can count on to welcome you in. Warm and cozy. The tears on the rims of your glasses is a beautiful touch.
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(N)icely done!
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A hot, tall dark roast is a perfect antidote to a broken heart. That last line is stellar, Jenna!
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Beautifully rendered!
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The last three lines, are impressive imagery, turning the speaker into the beverage. Very nice.
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Enjoyed this one! A hot tall and handsome!!
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Coffee is even more addictive than booze.
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Loving the mixture of words relating to coffee, alcoholic drinks and emotions. Good one, Jenna! Missed you at our last OLN LIVE. 🙂 Hope to see you at December’s.
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Perfect 🙂
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