Warning: This is another really dark piece. I wanted to share because it’s actually my first attempt at a six-sentence story. This week’s word is “redemption.” Special thanks to Frank because I always like to read his 6-sentence stories. 🙂
It’s okay. I was born with a ticking time-bomb inside my brain; we both knew it would detonate one day.
This redemption arc doesn’t quite reach its target. It seems my store of miracles has run out — there are no more.
“Please, no more!”
I’m sorry if the aftermath of this blast leaves too much wreckage.
revivedwriter 
May you have a fresh supply of miracles and may your redemption arc reach its target – which it will. Nice six! Profound insight. And thank you!
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Love this short story.
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I’ve wanted to write a 6 sentence story too. So I’m glad to read a “first try” from someone else.
Looks easy to me. Well, maybe not.
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Go for it!
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Wow! Powerful stuff. Great Six 🙂
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What an impressive introduction to this Caravan of Six. ‘I was born with a ticking time-bomb inside my brain’ is a gem.
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I’m glad you liked it.
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Drama and mystery packed with a punch, or should I say “blast”?! 2
Welcome to Six Sentences Stories!
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Well done and well-come!
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