For Frank J. Tassone’s current haikai challenge, autumn / spring equinox. I wrote a haibun.
We may have had all summer to enjoy the sun, and now night and day are even. Yet as autumn begins to descend, I can’t help feeling it’s not a fair fight. I keep waiting for the last leaf to fall — for the other shoe to drop.
Flaming, leaves are red —
In a world that’s upside-down
Somewhere it is Spring
Love the hope in the last line!
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Somewhere over the rainbow… 🌈
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Reblogged this on Frank J. Tassone and commented:
#Haiku Happenings #1 (9/26/20): revivedwriter’s latest #haibun for my current #Haikai Challenge!
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Yes, indeed. Well captured.
Pat
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