Fandango’s response to Jim Adams’s Thursday Inspiration prompt used the above picture, and it punched me in the gut. That inspired me to immediately post the following poem, which I did not write today but did write yesterday. I am much more than moderately sad but am actually doing better than the last few days. Sharing with DVerse OLN this week.
Did you truly love me, Or did you just love How I made you feel? I found out through tears That I truly love you, Irrespective of your answer. I am a broken shell Missing the sounds Of the ocean
I’m sorry you are feeling so sad.
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In so sorry. I didn’t mean for my post to trigger such bad, sad feeling in you.
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Your poetry flows out so smoothly, unless I misread what you wrote about being “moderately sad” as a way to match Fandango’s prompt.
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I hope you feel better soon, really poignant poem.
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This poem is so sad and relatable. I hope you feel better soon, onwards and upwards.🙂❤️❌
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Very deep and heartfelt poem.. Hope you will feel better soon and gear yourself up..💖❤
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I love waking up to your poetry each day 🌹
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Evocative and relatable. The last three lines are excellent expressions of the wounded and grieving soul. 🙏
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A deeply poignant write, Jenna.
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The sight of happy people can often remind us what we have lost.
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