The first haiku is in response to Heeding Haiku, which is about spiderwebs, and the haibun is for Frank’s fragrant breeze prompt.
Strong intricacy:
Potential, patterned beauty
In a spider’s home
There was a two- or three-day heat wave, when even the breeze, warm as it was, brought little relief. It still feels like summer, but it’s more manageable now. Maybe I will spend time in the garden, among the flowers.
Feeling fragrant breeze
‘Midst summertime loveliness:
Happiness and peace
Reblogged this on Frank J. Tassone and commented:
#Haiku Happenings #6: revivedwriter’s latest haiku, and a #haibun for my current #haikai challenge!
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