For Linda Kruschke’s paint-chip poetry #30 and also shared with the Writers’ Pantry
Life was a delightful potpourri:
The euphoria of even a penny on the sidewalk
Amazing, ten dollars in a birthday card.
Depth of exploration in our back yard
Rocks, bugs, dirt and the occasional lazy lizard.
Uncoordinated me loved to dance, felt free
As a ballerina in magical pink,
I floated since no one told me I should sink.
This made me smile. I particularly love the last line.
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An original write – your last line especially is great here – “I floated since no one told me I should sink…” Bravo!
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“life was a delightful potpourri”
wow that’s just beautiful and original.
i like the things you write in your poem cause they are all true. Happy new week!
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“I floated since no one told me I should sink…”…perfection!! An inspirational piece!
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beautiful!
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As others have said this is incredibly sweet and life affirming.
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This is wonderful! I love how seamlessly you integrated the prompt’s word and topic, especially the latter. I love that about children and young hearts, the wonders that can be accomplished when no one says that we can’t.
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Lucky her as she believed in herself. We should all try it.
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Worked in with ease. Light and fun. I especially like the last line.
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WOW what a gorgeous poem
Much💖love
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Delightful reminiscences!
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“sink” ends the poem with a resounding thud. Such is life!
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Smiles … Keep floating
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“I floated since no one told me I should sink.” – it’s incredible what one can accomplish when there is no one to tell them they can’t.
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Very nice!
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